Change in story

During a group discussion we found that we were not able to include all the aspects that we wanted to include and that we had brainstormed about. This is because it would take to long to film and we have deadlines to meet. Also the opening sequence had to be around 2 minutes. It would be impossible for us to include all elements within that time.

I proposed the idea that we cut down some of the characters such as Alesha, Omar boyfriend and Eve's friends Chloe and Hannah. I felt that they didn't really have a major part in the film and that they could easily be removed to save time.

We later decided to narrow down the events of the film to fit the approximate 2 minute deadline. The film would now be:

• Eve doing her make up in the mirror
• Recieving a text from Omar
• Omars then Knocks at the door and Eve lets him in
• They talk on the bed and Omar encourages her to do "something fun"
• Eve then stands up and strips of her clothes.
• Omar takes a picture of her and then leaves
• Eve is left emotional on the bed
• Eve walks past Omar and his friend and they laugh.